I am going to right about a very unique and interesting topic. The topic is about describing a perfect world. Well for me, a perfect world would include that all the people would not die. In my description of a perfect world, there would not be fights or wars, no killing (depending if the people do bad stuff or if they don't follow the rules), nor robbing and specially no problems in politics. It would be a peace world with no schools and no importance in money. The animals would be not wild, meaning they would not kill or act like angry animals. Poor people would not exist in my perfect world. It would not have natural disasters. This world would have machines that would help us disappear all the garbage and stuff like that. Pain wouldn't exist, the only emotion that would exist in this special place would be love and happiness. Drugs and smoking would not exist and it will have all the medicine to cure all diseases that humans have.
My description of a perfect world is very hard to believe. All the people would have a chance to travel to whatever part of the world they want. Any person that would not follow the rules, for example: not smoking or taking drugs, not killing or robbing, and all of that bad stuff people do, would be immediately taken and depending of what they do, they would be killed. This world would not have a president. All the people would choose what to do. Each tree would be in a different color and hopefully everyone would be healthy. In this world kind and caring giants would exist to help people pick up big things. The unicorns and dinosaurs would be alive. Everyone would have freedom, people would not call the darker skin people "black".
In this perfect world, we would be able to fly and instead of cars we would have spaceships. All the nights there would be fun and amazing parties, so all the people would get to know different persons each day. Everything would be modern, for example: buildings, houses shopping centers and all that kind of stuff. In my description of my perfect world, there would not be divorces and the fights between parents and kids (teenagers) would be done. The boys would not have the right to cheat on girls or you know what they call it "play" with girls. There would not be pollution, everything and everyone would be clean. All the people would be treated then same. The parents would not have to work, so they would have time for there children, show them love and importance.
In conclusion, my perfect world is very hard to believe. I would wont everything to be good, bad things would not exist in my description of a perfect world. All the living things that would live there would be happy no matter what and everyone would be loved. I really hope the real world would turn a bit like my description of a perfect world.
I think that what you described as a perfect world is similar to the community in The Giver. I would love to live in this community. It seems to be the ideal place to grow up. In writing terms, you sort of repeated the same things in each paragraph. You need to organize your writing a little but more. I think that you did a good job with your ideas, since the topic was to make up your own world.
ResponderEliminarI think that what you describe i perfect world is similar to the community in The Book. I choose the same number as you. I really think that your description is very material. That people would be happy if they travel to what ever part they want. I really don't like how you describe your perfect world.
ResponderEliminarI am glad that as Pedro Pablo you care about our world. As i said to PP, we need to take care of our world, and as soonest we start better. Imagine if we continue like this, the grandchildren of our grandchild would life in a contaminated world full of toxins and other harmful stuff. You have great plans for the humans civilization; however I don't think we would have all this wounder full stuff in our life time. Keep of the good effort.
ResponderEliminarAdri: You paragraph is very interesting. I like how you want everyone to be happy, and equals. You are right that if everyone was a good person, they wouldn't be wars, fights etc. I would also like a perfect world. Where they were no problems, and no one was selfish or hatred existed. The world now has a lot of problems. It is impossible to have a world where there is not destruction or bad things going on. Also what makes our world unique and special is that everything is different. Although we have very terrible things going in the world like drugs and those things, it really makes a difference. The truth is that we can change the world, but we all need to help. Very interesting paragraph.
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