In my opinion my artifact would help a lot in the world. I liked it a lot and i did put a lot of effort. What I liked the most is my idea of breathing under water. Another thing that i like is the fact of the bubbles that are in the wings that refer to water. What i did not like is the color of the belt, I would change it. Another thing that i did like is the white shiny star that is in the middle of the belt. Another thing that makes you know why I like it so much is because my artifact would help a lot in the world, in my opinion my artifact would make the world easier. like that In conclusion I put a lot of effort in this project.
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I really liked Fernanda's artifact, that is a machine that everything that you dream stays in the machine and like that you could see what you dram. Well, your project was very simple, if I were you I would put more cables so you know that your dream passes on to the machine, and it would be more interesting to watch and to learn about it. Another thing that I would put is some sentences that refer of what she is dreaming because some people would not understand what the machine does. In conclusion, you did an excellent job, but I hope that next time you do a better job.
In my opinion, your artifact was great. I think that it would exist in the future because it is a very interesting thing that people might need to do important stuff or you never know. I really liked your idea, I would use it in a lot of things, for example maybe you could use it to investigate all the things that you are dreaming and maybe it could help others see the rare problems that you have. The future would change a lot. It would change because seeng your thoughts is very important, it could tell us a lot about your self, so this would help a lot to people that help other people like psychiatrists. In conclusion, I really hope that your artifact would exsist in the future, it would make our lifes more easy especially for the psychiatrists.
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